Thread:Rikuya/@comment-3041235-20151017173129/@comment-3041235-20151018134548

Rather than saying what needs fixing asap, I think it might be better to just take it slowly. Whatever you have added remains and whatever needs adding/editing will come a little slower. If possible at all just brush up on the grammar bit and fix what you can, but most importantly, from what I saw of your additions, just don't add whole conversations into the page if all it takes is one line.

IMO (and I don't know if you hold the same notion as I do, so bear with me) wiki pages are meant to be summaries of events. Detailing every single thing that occurred in an event, even if accurate, is just going to bore readers to tears.