Thread:Rikuya/@comment-3041235-20151017173129

Hello.

I'm an on-off editor who shows up sometimes to do some massive editing work. I usually do this after watching several re-runs of let's plays and I often use the same let's plays to do the editing.

Now, I'm not entirely sure what is going on but often I see edits from you that just seems like content-adding and content-padding. While they are helpful, sometimes the description goes on for too long and they look like they tell the entire play-by-play within the game.

For example:

With Komaru new Truth Bullet, Paralyze, she and Toko able to defeat Kotoko's robot. Just before the Monokuma Kids execute Kotoko after she failed, Genocide Jack saved her from the execution.

Aside from the fact that this is too detailed (there really is no need to talk about in-game mechanics when writing the wiki of the story, imo), it does seem like there's a lot of these which can be summarized, like:

After defeating Kotoko's robot, the girl was almost taken by the Monokuma Kids to be executed, but Genocide Jack saved her instead.

I honestly hope that I don't come across as being a nay-sayer to you, because for all the good that has been done in adding content where no one else would, I feel that the quality of the articles I am reading have dropped; at least, some of the articles which were previously okay have started becoming somewhat incomprehensible.

I would like to see more content, but not to the point where nothing make sense. Thanks.

-Pasonia 